29 September 2006

first response to critique

when questions come there is a little rage
how could it not be obvious what's not to see
the words have meanings are clearly on the page
have been given all the power that there could be
to say what's needed indicate the cause
provide the understanding of each choice
show that the world though complex follows laws
and that the hubbub constitutes a voice
but here and there the critics magnify
each little flaw into a giant hole
ask what is meant what do you signify
what have you hidden at the further pole?
and all of this to say in simple time
one paragraph will satisfy their rhyme

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